LoSt In My OwN nIgHtMaRe

By Tangent Ponderings

Tonight i woke up
in a real world
first for seeing
then to touch

where might i be
i've lost myself
but woken suddenly
where might i be

who is this
stop knocking
leave me alone
im not here

theres to much
overwhelming
stop and breath
run for a while

what was that
what is going on
lost in my own head
such strange.....

feelings thoughts
dreams voices
feelings people
all FUCKING FAKE!

WAKE UP!
where am I
still don't know
10:30 the drugs

WAIT!
i remember something
but...
why?

i'm falling now
deeper and deeper
its getting warmer WARMER
Im sweating bullits

comotosis of some sort
it has to be
WHERE THE FUCK AM I!!!
I can see the way through the smoke

The flames are blinding me now
I watch as my fleash brightens
and then blisters
and it feels amazing

.................
...............
...............
.................

grass ?
where am I?
Oh FUCK~!
I'm gonna be late for work.

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© 2006 Tangent Ponderings
Published on Wednesday, March 29, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • mywristshurt On Thursday, May 18, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    i like the end, but the whole poem was very suspensful and i liked most of it.. some parts i could do with out, i just choose to say what.. otherwise it wouldn't be your true work.. anyways, good write

  • Lucklost On Wednesday, March 29, 2006, Lucklost (30)By person wrote:

    it was fun to read.

  • Philla On Wednesday, March 29, 2006, Philla (95)By person wrote:

    Lovely... this gave me a road trip inside your mind and it was so wonderful. Great write. -*Philla*-

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