LoSt In My OwN nIgHtMaRe
By Tangent Ponderings
Tonight i woke up
in a real world
first for seeing
then to touch
where might i be
i've lost myself
but woken suddenly
where might i be
who is this
stop knocking
leave me alone
im not here
theres to much
overwhelming
stop and breath
run for a while
what was that
what is going on
lost in my own head
such strange.....
feelings thoughts
dreams voices
feelings people
all FUCKING FAKE!
WAKE UP!
where am I
still don't know
10:30 the drugs
WAIT!
i remember something
but...
why?
i'm falling now
deeper and deeper
its getting warmer WARMER
Im sweating bullits
comotosis of some sort
it has to be
WHERE THE FUCK AM I!!!
I can see the way through the smoke
The flames are blinding me now
I watch as my fleash brightens
and then blisters
and it feels amazing
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grass ?
where am I?
Oh FUCK~!
I'm gonna be late for work.
Comments on "LoSt In My OwN nIgHtMaRe"
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On Thursday, May 18, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
i like the end, but the whole poem was very suspensful and i liked most of it.. some parts i could do with out, i just choose to say what.. otherwise it wouldn't be your true work.. anyways, good write
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On Wednesday, March 29, 2006, Lucklost
(30) wrote:
it was fun to read.
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On Wednesday, March 29, 2006, Philla
(95) wrote:
Lovely... this gave me a road trip inside your mind and it was so wonderful. Great write. -*Philla*-