a braille catastrophy

By Cassandra

slicing tongues in halves and shattering folklore
addiction of honesty and tears is just enough to kill an optimist
and conceal one's heart in a veil of black frost
eternally teased by serrated whispers promising hope
and to eradicate fear while truthfully engineering it
shadowing away faux racism and neon intentions
always look down, never up

terminal reverse psychology doesn't assist in a monotone world
where lillies bleed lavender and suffocate vulnerability:
beating hearts, convulsing lungs; chained to tears of lace
which are beaded so flawlessly onto destiny's tightrope oiled with superstition
look down, look down, look down
never to reflect upon a single tear from sullen gazes
oblivious that unfortunately we are all human; homosapians

and still dethroned banshees fail to enlighten eyes victim of lacking
forever sealed beneath solid steel plates of deception and rejection
oh, and how we manipulate ourselves and our loved ones
question it all now as you unravel yourself from your preservation of reassurance
drop your self-confidence and spit out battery acid - dont forget the embalming fluids:
how could one fail at failure?

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© 2006 Cassandra Day
Published on Thursday, March 23, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • colorapathy On Friday, April 11, 2008, colorapathy (50)By person wrote:

    ALright I'm addicted, I love your style of writing. Its paced at such a breakneck speed and always leaves you breathless and wondering how you got to the end. It makes me want to cradle my head, and go back to the begining and read it over.. rather like a roller coaster that makes you sick. Intense and enjoyable.

  • A former member wrote: Damn. I'm in awe. That doesn't happen much and means less. But Goddamn. It's so schizophrenic at break neck speed. A meth head OCD about words.

  • A former member wrote: wow this was very worth reading. very good.

  • KittyStryker On Thursday, June 22, 2006, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    This is incredible. Happy to see you on the site- your words are like a shot in the head.

  • Equinox Asylum On Saturday, April 1, 2006, Equinox Asylum (140)By person wrote:

    Enough, you,re killing me. Wow.

  • Solace On Sunday, March 26, 2006, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    This was quite an attempt I must say - has all the makings and trappings of a genius - a few lines were halting - but most were inspiring and eloquent

  • Solace On Sunday, March 26, 2006, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    manipulation - humanity - monotone world - killing the optimist (all favoured lines) This is a good beginning :)

  • Guillotine On Sunday, March 26, 2006, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    i'll be keeping an eye on you love you write brilliantly, with topics im sure everyone here at DP can relate to, or at least try to relate through your poignant use of imagery...

  • island warrior On Sunday, March 26, 2006, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Stunning write to say the least.

  • A former member wrote: i'm in shock that your only 14..you write with the maturity of someone much older..that said, this is just amazing..purr quoted my favorite line, haha. you have such an intoxicating way with words, swift and artful. i really hope you stay.

  • NeroMatches On Sunday, March 26, 2006, NeroMatches (49)By person wrote:

    she's only 14?! my god! wonderful wonderful piece miss cassandra. you are going right to my list of favorites. -jules

  • purr_verse On Friday, March 24, 2006, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    "terminal reverse psychology doesn't assist in a monotone world" - well, it's not the most erudite of comments from me but...that line just rocks. Heady and heavy imagery with unusual and creative metaphor; I'm definitely looking forward to reading more o

  • purr_verse On Friday, March 24, 2006, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    of your work. (One - probably stupid - question: the spelling of 'catastrophy': deliberate 'Y' for 'trophy' rather than the usual 'catastrophe'? If so...that's some nice worddancing. If not...it works anyway, hehe.)

  • virginalnympho On Thursday, March 23, 2006, virginalnympho (19)By person wrote:

    you're amazing. especially for so long. never stop writing. btw... you're def a fav

  • manywalks On Thursday, March 23, 2006, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Well, for almost 14, your work is amazing. Tight and finely crafted. Welcome to DP. ~ wen

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