Feel My Love

By Muse

How can I express to you the tears I've cried?
Every night they fall in time to my unsteady heartbeat
Healing crystal drops turned to acid
Burning scars down my face to stain my pillow
Eating away at me like maggots on decaying carrion
The burning stench driving all sanity clear
As the flames of my own demise leap higher
Despair and pain feeding the pitch pyre
Left to writhe and burn for all eternity

All this...

>All this when (by all rights) it should be happening to you

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© 2006 Muse
Published on Thursday, March 23, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Any On Friday, May 12, 2006, Any (39)By person wrote:

    -> "You goddamn bastard get the fuck out of my head and leave me the hell" Lovely work

  • Muse On Friday, March 24, 2006, Muse (57)By person wrote:

    aww shucks ya'll..you flatter me. *beams and hugs*

  • Equinox Asylum On Friday, March 24, 2006, Equinox Asylum (140)By person wrote:

    Clever Muse. Keep searching the dark corners of your soul. No matter what shade of gray you may find. I enjoy the read.

  • Dissolving Poet On Thursday, March 23, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    *Hugs*

  • Dissolving Poet On Thursday, March 23, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    Damn right's...Grab the squirming worm and pull him out of your brain, and crush him.:) sorry couldnt' resist now onto the poem..That was painful to read but nicely exsposed and made my feel all tingly inside because I know this feeling too well..Damn him

  • Muse On Friday, March 24, 2006, Muse (57)By person wrote:

    mymy, morbid are we? but if i did that..all the guts n stuff would mess the paint on my walls up. and i just redid them to cover the stains. maybe next time!

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