My Promise

By Omalleyjr

come as you are
come hear my words
those words that calm your nerves
move closer
come stand by me
and let your fears melt away
look right here
look right into my eyes and see them as t hey look upon your beauty
in both physical and beyond
bring me your hand
and put it within my own
and let me guide you through all of lifes adventures
for together we can make it all possible
come step forward
let us embrace each others bodies
together we can watch the world just vanish around us
hold me tight
tight as you can
and i shall never let harm come to you
for the rest of your life
ever since you came into my life
you took my breath away
i knew right then and there
that as long as we breath
this love
will forever be
eternal

march 17, 2006

''this is my word, this is my vow, this is my promise."

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© 2006 Omalleyjr
Published on Friday, March 17, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • TaintedButterfly On Friday, March 17, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    This is such a sweet & true to the heart piece. To make this kind of promise is truly a commitment. Beautiful, great job!! Julia~

  • elisa On Friday, March 17, 2006, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    a breath of fresh air.... i love this.... the meaning... the words... the feeling.... in a class of your own, you are...thanks for sharing.

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