Telltale Waltz

By blake

And so it is, that I, am a captive of your love
Bound by chains as real as iron, of my will,
As true as the fetters of the flight-kept dove
I am, forevermore, nevermore, with you still.

Of your form, graceful, flickering flame, swaying
Were bindings made, of furtive glances, coy?
‘Cross the ballroom floor, orchestra playing…
So it was that I was made your, sweet, boy.

And swept aloft, feathers to the wind by
A moonlit sonata, fingers, then lips entwined,
And in hushed murmurs found where the sinned lie,
Till, you.. and I, breathless, were but heaven confined.

By this telltale waltz, in remembrance, you lay.
My eyes, whisper-blue, grow distant and see that dawn:
‘Neath moon and stars akin you remained, till day,
And were, as if but a dream, with waking gone.

And so it is, that I, am a captive of your love
Bound by chains as real as iron, of my will,
As true as the fetters of the flight-kept dove
I am, forevermore, nevermore, with you still.

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© 2006 blake h.
Published on Wednesday, February 22, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this is still just so lovely...haunted ans sultry.

  • A former member wrote: still coming back to this; again and again.........

  • A former member wrote: i came back to this; methinks i'm gonna have to favourtize this. .blessings and thanks for these words divine. nessa

  • A former member wrote: stylish... and sonorous... and very very sensual in every manner; really quite gorgeous and again, i love this polished stylized signet of yours...~ness

  • monalisamarie On Saturday, March 25, 2006, monalisamarie (113)By person wrote:

    a collection of words i see nicely done

  • mozarts cat On Friday, March 17, 2006, mozarts cat (184)By person wrote:

    I loved the title, and was compelled to click :) .. this is truly beautiful .. this is poetry ~V

  • A former member wrote: wow...... your (semi) new hear and you already kick ass

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  • WinterGrave On Thursday, March 2, 2006, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    nice flow, vary tender, a joy to read.~~~Grave

  • A former member wrote: its not chained by the rhyme which is always refreshing, it flows. Lots of nice imagery in this that I enjoyed, and I found a lot of common ground in the emotional feel of it. :)

  • D3ADT0WN On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, D3ADT0WN (186)By person wrote:

    i love it good job

  • Dissolving Poet On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    wow the words surrounded me in emotion and image's of this poem it was really beautiful. It was great and heartbreakingly full of passion. Great wright

  • A former member wrote: *heartsigh* This is utterly gorgeous.. reads like soft yet patterned sighs breathed against upturned wrists.. twisting, inviting, beautiful..thank you.

  • Shewolf On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, Shewolf (25)By person wrote:

    so sweet it makes my heart ache....beautiful ~Shewolf~

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