The Light of Wisdom?

By BlackBear

On a dark and lonely road, as I slowly lost my way
In a night of bitter cold, thinking it’s my final day
Watching the stars wheel above, wetted cheeks a burning flame
Hope abandoned, dying dove, my life’s failures only blame
I’m alive; my heart is fast, a falling star, a spark of mind
Accept the record of the past; allow the past to fall behind
From the ashes rises chance; hope of future yet unknown
No certain knowledge in advance of whether wisdom has grown.

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© 2006 BlackBear
Published on Sunday, February 19, 2006.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"
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  • TaintedButterfly On Monday, February 20, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    I'm happy you saw that star!!! I hope you don't go anywhere. Fate stepped in, and you had this wonderful moment. Amazing! Love & hugs* ♥ Julia~

  • Aurora_Light On Sunday, February 19, 2006, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    very nicely writen and the meaning is convaded well. i love the line, "From the ashes rises chance; hope of future yet unknown". well done indeed and it is beautifull that the beauty of nature caused such a change in you *bows*

  • BlackBear On Sunday, February 19, 2006, BlackBear (12)By person wrote:

    This is a true story. It happened last night, February 18, 2006. This may very well have been the last day of my life, until a falling star, in and of itself, changed the path of my thoughts. - Michael

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