Perfidy

In freeing me from love’s sweet grip
She pulled the veil from o’er mine eyes.
But seeing, feeling life without her
Leaves memories: betrayer’s lies.

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Published on Thursday, February 9, 2006. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Perfidy"

On Monday, May 1, 2006, mywristshurt (408) wrote:

this was really short.. plz write more to this one, i'd love to hear a longer, better story
A former member wrote: poignant precision... liquid flow and imagery; please stay awhile :} ~ness
On Saturday, February 11, 2006, blue (1454) wrote:

=) Minimalistic excellence here, most certainly! Welcome to DP. ~b
On Friday, February 10, 2006, purr_verse (1059) wrote:

Magnificently succinct, beautifully crafted piece. Manywelcomes to dp - this is quality. :)
On Friday, February 10, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670) wrote:

This is perfection. *applauds this and you* What a way to enter DP Land... Just astounding! Julia~
On Friday, February 10, 2006, elisa (1616) wrote:

life without love would be treason....well said.