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Kiss the Sun
By LilBlueCat
Cat tails gather near the water's edge
Huddling knee deep in sunken pools
Mosquitos shake excitedly with disease
Blue gill flinch; a golden eagle power dives....
Success struggles against deepening talons
A quivering heartbeat bursts.
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© 2005 LilBlueCat
Published on Friday, December 16, 2005.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Kiss the Sun"
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On Friday, December 28, 2007, italianbella
(185)
wrote:
powerful write
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A former member wrote:
powerful imagery..you capture nature so poignantly in only a handful of lines.
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On Friday, May 26, 2006, Mari
(425) wrote:
i wish i could kiss the sun of only it wouldnt burn my lips off
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, monalisamarie
(113) wrote:
Yummy
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A former member wrote:
my word, this is fantastic..so brief and fervently weaved, and in snowflake elegance. i could go on and on about how beautiful this is.
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On Friday, December 16, 2005, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
*bows* this allows me to see the images in my mind there is no longer 5in of snow but lush grass and summer heat a setting perfect for the last two lines to be set in. great job
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On Friday, December 16, 2005, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
whoo hoo first comment
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