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Hitchhiker
By Jazz Daffy
Seven sleepless nights
Can seem like forever
When merely a grain in the sands of time
Ninety-three miles
Can seem like a million
When lost as a pinpoint among the stars
One silver ring
Can seem like the world
When the moment calls mayday at your feet
Ecstacy
Can seem like a holiday
When cold nights remember last year's fire
A heartbreak
Can seem like the end
When drowned in the blood of a country
Define love
In a man or two
Define life
In four apologies
Define me and you
In 80 words or less
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, Army Barbie
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wrote:
Huh..."A heartbreak Can seem like the end When drowned in the blood of a country." Man do I know that. Wondahful dahlin, just wondaful!
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, Err0r
(365) wrote:
That was brutal, structured and impressive. I loved every stanza to this. :)
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, glasshouse
(548) wrote:
The last stanza was killer. Very nice piece. It was rough and it wasnt delicate, it was a straight voice in an empty hall speaking nothing but truth. nicely done. -Glass
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