Your Love

By Shatterdtearsangl

Your love is so sweet,
I know you mean every word of it
In my mind I search for your longing voice
I hear nothing
I strain and hear it again
the words "I love you" don't come
Is this a real?
Do I love you?
My heart says yes, but something else tell me no

Confused and lonely here I sit, struggling on decisions

I hear your voice when I call you, you say I love you.
It put a spring in my heart and a jump to my life.
but questioning thoughts again pop in my head
Do I love you? What should I do?
give up and go on to something new?
quietly whisper I love you too
Even though in my heart i hate you.

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Copyright 2005 Shatterdtearsangl
Published on Friday, October 14, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Malice In Wonderland On Wednesday, May 11, 2011, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    Agonizing, ambivalence can get the best of us, as I just said to someone else... this pain in this is apparent. Scholar

  • veingo On Saturday, October 29, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    This could do some damage. Wow. ^V^

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Monday, October 17, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    7th line, is this real, i don't think a need to be there still well written

  • DoctorAsh On Friday, October 14, 2005, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    Wow, holy fucking scary chemical bomb. . I hope this was just a poem and not based off of factual events, because its not very nice to decieve people. But the write was nice and entertaining. [D&A]

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