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A Friendship Defined...
By MidniteBlaze
Ranting and raving
caring and loving
I return the favor
Lately there is no favor to return
but I still treat accordingly
I would not want to put hurt upon another
No hesistation from the other end however
giving one freedom to feel good
just to drown them underground
The feelings gone
the meaning to love destroyed
right before your eyes
no effort made
no will to continue on
Over and over
no more
Strip me of my pride
make me feel special just to down me
like a baby without it's bottle
like a child without proper education
Restrain me from the good things in life
forget the love, I get the point
but don't keep the friendship at bay
why avoid me
I just seek your company
is that too much to ask?
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Copyright 2005 MidniteBlaze
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On Thursday, October 6, 2005, The_Lady_in_the_Fire
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wrote:
This is a little sad. "Strip me... proper education" (sorry, didnt want to write the entire stanza out), that stanza describes everything that is. Wonderful write. *Torah*
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A former member wrote:
"forget the love, I get the point" *Frowns* and once again, your words have forced me to remember things that would be better off forgotten. This struck home like a bat to the head...lovely. *Evangel*
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