Trip To The Heavens

By MidniteBlaze

Standing alone
awaiting that special arrival
today and tonight
would be a day to never forget
the interaction
communication
and activities
nothing to go wrong?
not exactly
but nothing here is perfect
however I can accept what I have
a chance to be myself without restriction
be understood and cared for in addition
for in fact a fantasy is upon me
because a thing like this is seldom true
not like this
simply never this close to perfect
never had a time so great
never thought I would have such a delightful time
I had what I would say, in my opinion
is known as a trip to the heavens
thanks for sharing this trip with me
and thanks for even making the trip possible
forever in debt I shall be
for an expereince that is oh so great
my mental status in paradise
finally I can relax

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Copyright 2005 MidniteBlaze
Published on Friday, September 30, 2005.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • Err0r On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    The ending was perfect. 'finally I can relax' Great write.

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