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my dear thoughts
By squench
my dear thoughts,
kindly spare me sometime to breathe without choking on chaos. since just
the other day i stopped feeling you end or begin and every bit of peace
that i bleed to squeeze in you just turned into hate. i wonder how much
more time do i have before we stop this exercise of dwindling battle. i
told you ages ago, i have no intentions of letting you paint me you. stop
or i'll end us both.
earnestly,
you-know-who
p.s - thanks for that creepy line on being detached!
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Copyright 2005 squench
Published on Monday, September 26, 2005.
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On Monday, September 26, 2005, wandering druid
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wrote:
I don't agree with Melvin. You said a thousand pages worth in that short paragraph. But, that's my opinion. Anyway, very nice. I look forward to reading more of your works.
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On Thursday, October 13, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
I'm with him on this one. You said a lot for it's length.
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A former member wrote:
this has the potential to be really good, all you need to do is lengthen it to about a page or more.....it was however a joy to read on its own
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On Monday, September 26, 2005, Dei
(665) wrote:
hmmm interesting
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