bubble gum love

By squench



on a slow moment
young thoughts
harden

under moving silence
your absence
cheers

beneath the smiles
calculated eyes
feel

twisting the past stiff
burning love
chews



on me

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Copyright 2005 squench
Published on Saturday, September 17, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: It makes me want to go camping.

  • Bluegirl On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    Beautifully articulated. :) I love this piece.

  • A former member wrote: Marvelously rendered. Welcome to DP.

  • girlafraid On Saturday, September 17, 2005, girlafraid (480)By person wrote:

    i like this...very interesting little piece...i'll be looking forward to more, welcome to DP.

  • Dei On Saturday, September 17, 2005, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    deliciouse

  • AHHH On Saturday, September 17, 2005, AHHH (187)By person wrote:

    nice write.

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