bubble gum love
By squench
on a slow moment
young thoughts
harden
under moving silence
your absence
cheers
beneath the smiles
calculated eyes
feel
twisting the past stiff
burning love
chews
on me
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Copyright 2005 squench
Published on Saturday, September 17, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
It makes me want to go camping.
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
Beautifully articulated. :) I love this piece.
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A former member wrote:
Marvelously rendered. Welcome to DP.
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On Saturday, September 17, 2005, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
i like this...very interesting little piece...i'll be looking forward to more, welcome to DP.
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On Saturday, September 17, 2005, Dei
(665) wrote:
deliciouse
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On Saturday, September 17, 2005, AHHH
(187) wrote:
nice write.