Private Longing

By MidSummers Eve

Thinking of all the times we were together,
How you used to laugh at my pathetic jokes,
Instead of telling me I'm stupid,
Stiffling your sharp retorts for my precious ego.

Intellegent,
Sophisticated,

To love me is a gift I don't deserve,
How you can be so loving, when I'm so cruel,
Eloping with you was the best moment of my life.

Although, we parted in the end,
Ultimate love was ours,
The eternal lands of the
Universe, our private playground
My love bloomed, and never stopped growing
Never will it fade,

Optimisim is always there, not letting me end it,
Forgive me please, I repent for my transgressions

You're my love, my heart, my soul,
Only you know who and what I am,
Untill you return, I won't be whole,
Revive me with your presense, return my vitality,

Don't you see my love?
Eternaly yours, to do as you please,
My life, my love is yours,
I wish you would return to me,
Silence answers my pleas, so here I wait,
Eternity is all to short.

~AR Davis

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Copyright 2005 MidSummers Eve
Published on Friday, September 16, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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