New Life
By lostshadow
Sitting, waiting, quietly wonderingwhere am I? I look around and all I see is darkness. I feel a fear and a cold never felt by man. I see a faint light in the distance I begin walking to the light but it never gets closer. I run to the light but it seems to move further away. I fall to my knees and begin to weep where am I? how did I get here? I feel a cold wind I turn and look I see every demon I have ever defeated, they look at me they tell me to follow the light it will lead me to my fate. I stand and wipe my eyes I turn and begin running to the light finaly the light is close. I can see the outline of a woman standing with her arms out I fall at the feet of the angel that has saved me from the darkness. I look its you, you look at me with kind eyes and I feel warm air around me my journey is over I have found my angel my love my home.
Comments on "New Life"
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On Wednesday, September 14, 2005, Bellezza
(16) wrote:
Nice idea behind it. There are a few grammar mistakes that distracted me a bit. I wasn't sure if you meant to do it that way or not. Anyways, welcome!
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On Monday, September 12, 2005, Doc
(143) wrote:
certainly portrays a little hope, a rare topic here, I like that, welcome to DP
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A former member wrote:
Nicely written...I enjoyed reading this. "my journey is over I have found my angel" Oh to be found and welcomed instead of lost and forgotten...*Evangel*