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Like A Bullet To The Head
By MidniteBlaze
Over and over again
this is what is best
used
abused
digusted by the never changing future
he wanted to end his life
Revived by another soul
wanting to try the same thing
the same thing that falls to shit everytime
but try anyway
what is the worst that could happen?
he again, wanted to end his life
Unconscious
no sense of life
never to be born again
no longer the same mistakes to be made
trying is pointless
life is futile and cruel
no more
god please no more
This is it
while wronged himself
he has wronged as well
hatred for himself only however
and not for the ones who cause the pain
damaging thyself day by day
no reason why
life is not needed as there is no place for him
fuck it all and the emotions tied to it
cease the day
like a bullet to the head
ceased for the final time
frozen up in thought until the bullet does it's job
refused to resist temptation once more
he ended his life
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Copyright 2005 MidniteBlaze
Comments on "Like A Bullet To The Head"
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A former member wrote:
yessirreeeeee this seeeems to have a very finely tuned feel to it... mmmmm reminds me of a tune playing right now somewhere....nice
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A former member wrote:
you tell your story so well. this is so cold, and so numb, and witten so perfectly. great job with this. ....-samone
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On Sunday, October 9, 2005, AHHH
(184)
wrote:
nicely done.
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On Friday, September 9, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
bitter, cruel, hatefelt. The repetition of mistakes and feelings of self-ending make me feel like ending it for them.
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On Friday, September 9, 2005, MidSummers Eve
(38) wrote:
powerful, it tells the tale.
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