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Red River Flow
By down-sx-ft
Eyes open wide
Still I see
Still I find
No one around me
Hurting pain
Depressing reality
Cut the vein
Feel the fatality
No one cares
Slice and be
Out of here
Away and free
Let blood seep
Create a scar
Cut it deep
Into your arm
Red river flow
Out from the vein
Fall down below
Get rid of the pain
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Copyright 2005 down-sx-ft
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A former member wrote:
this was awesome good job....~~gap~~
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On Tuesday, August 30, 2005, Possesion
(136)
wrote:
Indeedy, it was good.
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
good rhyming... the last verse was really intense
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On Wednesday, July 13, 2005, thornyrose
(23) wrote:
at a loss with this one..very deep and intense...
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A former member wrote:
Hmm.. It hurts to hear. I know what it's like...
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On Sunday, July 10, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Cliche
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