Serenity

By MidniteBlaze

The great feeling of acceptance
and knowing you are not alone
while many others share the same views
yours is flawless to me

The way your words struck me
everything suddenly made sense
I know you suffer as well as I do
and your feelings I know I feel too

If I could hear the voice
of the one here who has made me feel better
the one who makes my day
It would be enough for me

You have touched me with your words
in a sense I cannot even describe
but I know I feel great because of it
so once again, I thank you

If I could see you it would be a miracle
the soul of the one who helped me through tough times
just by posting how you feel
your poetry, soothing to me
makes me face reality
you make me feel relaxed

Just to know someone does care
even if it is only through text
one day that will change perhaps
I await the oppertunity

Thank you for everything
as I deliver a poetic "I love you"
to your kind hearted soul

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Copyright 2005 MidniteBlaze
Published on Thursday, June 23, 2005.     Filed under: "Spiritual" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Sweet :) Congrats on poem of the day, ~S

  • Cutting_for_Freedom On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Cutting_for_Freedom (34)By person wrote:

    This was sweet. Nicely done.

  • Forgotten Angel On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Forgotten Angel (310)By person wrote:

    this is a couple? this is sooo sweet...great write..cant say enough bout it! -Kel

  • A former member wrote: i think serenity is awsome and not just cause shes my sister but because i look up too her she really has everything i wish i could have...its a good poem...peace out...rhea

  • vaultgrl On Thursday, June 23, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    beautifully beautiful....

  • Serenity On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    My love this has truly made my day. Just the thought of being able to help you in some way brings a smile to my face. I to away an opportunity to see you.

  • Serenity On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    I'm out of words sadly. But there's so much I could say. You've had a place in my heart since we first talked, and forever it'll stay.

  • Serenity On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    You are beautiful and hon no matter how or what I'm always here for you.

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