Serenity
By MidniteBlaze
The great feeling of acceptance
and knowing you are not alone
while many others share the same views
yours is flawless to me
The way your words struck me
everything suddenly made sense
I know you suffer as well as I do
and your feelings I know I feel too
If I could hear the voice
of the one here who has made me feel better
the one who makes my day
It would be enough for me
You have touched me with your words
in a sense I cannot even describe
but I know I feel great because of it
so once again, I thank you
If I could see you it would be a miracle
the soul of the one who helped me through tough times
just by posting how you feel
your poetry, soothing to me
makes me face reality
you make me feel relaxed
Just to know someone does care
even if it is only through text
one day that will change perhaps
I await the oppertunity
Thank you for everything
as I deliver a poetic "I love you"
to your kind hearted soul
Awards
Comments on "Serenity"
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A former member wrote:
Sweet :) Congrats on poem of the day, ~S
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On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Cutting_for_Freedom
(34) wrote:
This was sweet. Nicely done.
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On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(309) wrote:
this is a couple? this is sooo sweet...great write..cant say enough bout it! -Kel
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A former member wrote:
i think serenity is awsome and not just cause shes my sister but because i look up too her she really has everything i wish i could have...its a good poem...peace out...rhea
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On Thursday, June 23, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
beautifully beautiful....
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On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
My love this has truly made my day. Just the thought of being able to help you in some way brings a smile to my face. I to away an opportunity to see you.
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On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
I'm out of words sadly. But there's so much I could say. You've had a place in my heart since we first talked, and forever it'll stay.
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On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
You are beautiful and hon no matter how or what I'm always here for you.