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No More Pain
By Soulfire
My heart has shattered
Nothing in this hateful world matters
So I fill this needle with Novocain
And stab my heart to kill the pain
..........doesn't work
I take the entire bottle of little blue pills
If this won't work, nothing will
Slowly the sedative pulls on my eyes
But nothing can stop my cries
................save me
A hot bath and a razor blade
In a pool of my own blood I wade
My pulse is getting weaker, but I feel no pain
As all my problems go down the drain
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Copyright 2005 Soulfire
Published on Thursday, June 2, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "No More Pain"
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A former member wrote:
dark sadness, pain to be seen and felt here...when one only thinks there is only one way out to end the pain...with this i hope you can and have found some peace....
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On Sunday, June 19, 2005, Soulfire
(97)
wrote:
Mr. King you are oh so nice. It's the kindness of a stranger that means the most in life so..Thank-You.
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On Friday, June 17, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
hold my hand
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On Friday, June 17, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
and keep reading...
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On Friday, June 17, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
i pray you find life and power in my words...
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On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, Sentient Ignorance
(9) wrote:
Beautiful, I have come from this past. well except the razor part. Nothing helped and its exciting to see someone esle express such a deep pain. Encore ~Chris
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A former member wrote:
i've though about that so many times. i know where you are coming from. beautiful write.
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A former member wrote:
now thats dark ;) maybe a few rhythm issues but other than that i love it
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On Thursday, June 2, 2005, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
i dissagree with that. Rhythming is uninportant. This is a morbid poem,beautifully written.
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