passerby(beloved)

By not an addict

this is not worth mentioning
considering
the failure of
a second glance
in my direction
less the weight
of any sort of conscience
leaves you free to
disregard me
incomplete i am
unworthy
at your feet i am
unnerving
aware
and fully capable
of retaliation

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Copyright 2005 not an addict
Published on Wednesday, May 18, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • doll on the rag On Saturday, June 25, 2005, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    one of my alltime favorites of yours, if only for the last bit: "and fully capable of retaliation." lovely, you are missed.

  • Elegant Kiss On Monday, May 23, 2005, Elegant Kiss (178)By person wrote:

    Ahh, wonderful write, sweets. It held a soft undertone of power and calmness.

  • Kinkypoptart On Thursday, May 19, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    you are amazingly talented. Good write ~*~Tart~*~

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