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dancing to the beat of psychosis
By not an addict
trite, temperamental
let's forgive
the insecurity
beneath her smile
it's a given
we've neglected her again,
but we've her best interests in mind
she'll understand
the sacrifice we make (her take)
to keep her safe some day
she's such a precious thing,
we really love her so
really, but i wonder...
does she know?
(hold still darling, don't cry, just a few... more.... there,
all better now, see? you didn't really want those wings, did you?)
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Copyright 2005 not an addict
Published on Wednesday, May 18, 2005.
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On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Sin
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wrote:
brilliant and i have to echo Valentine those last lines were flawless, great write ~kristy
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On Thursday, July 20, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
i like the beat.. and it's a cool poem too.. i honetly don't really enjoy the title, but i understand where u are coming from.. good job
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A former member wrote:
just, perfect. those last lines.. timeless..
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A former member wrote:
Damn. Last couple of lines were tremendous. Very nicely done:) ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
ouch
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On Thursday, May 19, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Great write. I love your name... Not an Addict... I'm not an addict either... most of the time. However, all of us are addicted to something somewhere along the line. Great write ~*~Tart~*~
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