Sunset

Time slides by
As we sit and wonder why
Those we love most
Take off and fly
Toward the beautiful sunset
At the end of the sky

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Published on Saturday, April 30, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Sunset"

A former member wrote: IF THE SUN COULD BE LICKED - I AM QUITE CERTAIN IT WOULD TASTE LIKE THIS. SUCH LOVELINESS..
A former member wrote: Like a painting, and you squint to look past the sunset and onto the horizon, feeling of desolation under so much beauty.
A former member wrote: I really like the way you worded this, reminds me of a quote from a song "It's never easy to understand why memories hold our hands but people let go." Awsome write. ~Ship!
On Sunday, May 1, 2005, AniDayz (820) wrote:

dammm...you etch out such an intense wonderment...inquisitive-ness...real/emotion..in such a beautiful way. e v e r y time. this is under my skin.
On Saturday, April 30, 2005, blue (1454) wrote:

Oh wow, this just grabbed me in a way...the way poems should... *applause*ovation* ...where do I send the check?? :P ~b
On Saturday, April 30, 2005, Sin (1168) wrote:

you write with such a gentle passion..and you express things so elegantly...even your pain is beautiful..nice write ~kristy
On Saturday, April 30, 2005, GirlintheBox (41) wrote:

i like the way this flows off my tongue. its pretty :) ~krystal