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Slowly Giving Up
By MidniteBlaze
This is an action I would rather not take
but you leave me no choice
I cannot do this anymore
I do not want to slowly tear myself apart
it hurts to even think like this
but I've been stomped on long enough
I have gotten the hint more than enough times
and after this third act
I think it is finally set
no longer can I be put through this
no longer will I bother you with my prescence unless you wanted
no longer can I treat you in certain way
I'll always love you
but the love back if any is not the same
I hate to say this I really do
but I am slowly giving up
and it continues to break my heart
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Copyright 2005 MidniteBlaze
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A former member wrote:
This is really good, it sounds like a suicide note, until line 12, then it turned into sorrow in its pure form, the painful kind.
Until line 12, it seemed almost average, it was beyond that point that it was wonderful
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918)
wrote:
i can feel the deep sorrow in your words..
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