I Will Forget You

By Savannah


In your palm, you hold my life,
My hopes, my fears, my dreams.
You close them in your iron fist,
So no one hears my screams.

Crushed and broken, in your hand,
My heart, my soul, my tears.
Your arms are open, to the wind,
As you let go of three years.

Scattered peices, everywhere,
I search the world to find,
The reminants of my shattered life,
To leave you far behind.

Certain peices, not picked up,
Those shards that still contain,
A memory, thought, or love for you.
In the dirt, they will remain.

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Copyright 2005 Savannah
Published on Tuesday, April 12, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • island warrior On Thursday, April 21, 2005, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Very impressive write.

  • A former member wrote: Loved it, gave me a sense of power over my own situation thanx, great write

  • A former member wrote: be careful of the dirt along your road... it can make an alluring trap. Excellent write

  • A former member wrote: absolutely wonderful

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    simply beautiful! this is a reminder of why your on my faves list..look forward to seeing more.

  • so_skeevy On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, so_skeevy (64)By person wrote:

    wow, powerful. Tragically beautiful. Good job.

  • stuart_pid On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, stuart_pid (135)By person wrote:

    amazing concept, beautifully written and oh so sad. i love this one.

  • A former member wrote: Wow. I like this. The rhyme scheme is nice too, makes for great flow.... and I know how you feel. - Orchid

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