Imperfectly Beautiful

By hopeless

Last night i chased the leaves across the ponds, the ones that were still wrapped in winters white grasp, droplets still frozen in webs, embraced on the blue cheeks of each child, frigid hands didnt warm the ice into water, instead the ice provided its own warmth to them, their bodies colder then a breath in space, and a word spoken so quietly it stings..

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Copyright 2005 Bernadette
Published on Wednesday, April 6, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Anth On Monday, April 18, 2005, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    i utterly adore this work,so many things in the way you describe it just stand out so vividly and beautiful, sublime

  • A former member wrote: beautiful work.

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