"waking up on a spring/winter morning?" (2.3.05)

By Buckwise McDickermeat

weep amidst evergrowing solipsism -
(you're) slipping into; (is Descartes laughing?)
baiting every telephone discourse,
with the subtlety salient taste of vaginal delicacies.

PLEASE
repine your enervation and horrendous misfortunes, dear love!
it hardly covers your
fallacious daily driven jocund existance.

(is it flaunting or faking when you
truly believe in your lies?)

not - pioneering new roads
when - mullings hold us bound.

forking greater paths still,
and tumbling through still heavier ruminations,
i'm lost,
but i'm holding glass next to you.

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Copyright 2005 Buckwise McDickermeat
Published on Monday, April 4, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • worm On Thursday, August 31, 2017, worm (1194)By person wrote:

    hmmm... write more!

  • urbanhumility On Wednesday, August 1, 2007, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    articulate and enriched with such well chosen words......brilliant.......your diction is powerful..........so very well spoken...........urban

  • A former member wrote: you certainly have a way with words :P

  • Solace On Tuesday, April 5, 2005, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Of course, such a banal event is not banal at all, the expressions, the wording so perfect...Par excellence, i truly enjoyed this masterpiece, exquisite poetry...

  • AniDayz On Monday, April 4, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    ...dammit...you are fucking incredible...this is .... [words escape my mind...]...i am completely hooked .

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