Blankets of rusted knifes

By hopeless

Im alone for the time,
being a hundred minutes hours and days
Your eyes will shut out the light,
being told the darkness will blind you
And secrets,
lay shattered in taped pieces on the ground
The open book,
tells it a story in monographic pictures
No color,
displaying and proposing imagination
Inspiration,
the white dot on your heart felt apology
And the leaves,
well... they began to fall long before
your eyes mimicked the twinkle of the stars.

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Copyright 2005 hopeless
Published on Sunday, February 6, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Anth On Sunday, February 6, 2005, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    this is crushing in a beautiful way, i really feel what your saying in this, its amazing how you find such perfect ways of describing feelings, the first part shattered me in an instant, from then on i was rebuilt and shattered again by the ending,

  • Anth On Sunday, February 6, 2005, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    i wish i could comment better, just know that i really understood these words

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