Enemy

By Psyko

Bitch dont fucking mess with me
'cause i'm your fucking enemy
i'll slit your damn throat
and watch you fucking choke
in your own blood of sorrow
and if I dont get you today
i'll definetly get you tomorrow

bitch you better watch your back

i'm watching every move you make
your not that fucking tough,
step up to me and your bound to brake
I hate your voice
and your face
Do you wanna die now?

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Published on Thursday, February 3, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Enemy"

On Thursday, February 17, 2005, AHHH (184) wrote:

dude you're awesome.
On Thursday, February 3, 2005, Whisper (112) wrote:

Come the fuck down, hate is something that consumes you as of late. ~MoonDemon~
On Thursday, February 3, 2005, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...I'm one that feels that some profanity can work wonders in a write; its overuse might give a bad image, though...variety in profanity, though, could help it out a bit...
A former member wrote: like it.... and I feel profanity is totally necessary.........
On Thursday, February 3, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917) wrote:

i like this...very well expressed emotions and the profanity is a perfect touch ...~AoD
On Thursday, February 3, 2005, Gideon Lost (137) wrote:

Wow, this one seems angry. The profanity works here too. I wonder if you could get the same effect using other words though? Just a thought. Nice Write!