How Long Will It Take?

By Krusifire

How long will it take?
Until we get it right.
How long till we break?
When will we win the fight?
I give.
You take.
I will.
Not break.
Like a dog without a home.
Like a child all alone.
Always doing what he's told.
I think it's time we break the mold.

I found it.
Bleeding inside of you.
I killed it.
Before it...

Could sink it's teeth into your soul.
We found the strength to let it go.
We killed the pain and broke the mold.
We turned our pennies into gold.

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Copyright 2005 Krusifire
Published on Saturday, January 29, 2005.     Filed under: "Lyrics"
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  • Gideon Lost On Saturday, January 29, 2005, Gideon Lost (137)By person wrote:

    This is great. You kinda get the sense of people fighing over something between them, pushing and shoving it back and forth. Nice write!

  • blue On Saturday, January 29, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    Krus, that was really great stuff man!!! ~b

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