what happened to me while in love

By Nuada

Ok this is corny (isn't anything written about lvoe that way) however this is what I felt like when I was in love.

the butterflies abound
the world it spins
the music resounds
the love allways wins

a hardened heart turns
to a welcome flutter
a hardend heart turns
to an open shutter

A stolid soul quakes
to its foundation
splitting in twain
to jubilation

this love is alive
with a passion so deep
this love is alive
with a sudden leap

thoughts of her
swirl around
forming a pattern
of colors and sound

the longing so deep
the passion so real
my heart it weeps
at an experience sureal

this love of mine
it feels so right
this love of mine
it shines so bright

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Copyright 2005 Nuada
Published on Thursday, January 27, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • AniDayz On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    this is NOT corny in any shape or form. i think it is simply beautiful*.

  • A former member wrote: -smiles-

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