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Rising
By Nuada
i watch the sun
as it rises aloft
lighting the way
for the shadows
to chase
I watch the sun as it sets
in the west
bringing nights embrace
the moon it glows
with a silent smile
its tender caress
illuminating
all the while....
tears gone stale
for a love gone cold
regrets unveiled
for a passion grown old
shakes and sobs
for a story untold........
I follow its path
as it graces the sky
falling to the east
slowly fading
as the sun chases
it with a tender glee
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Copyright 2005 Nuada
Published on Thursday, January 20, 2005.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Rising"
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On Monday, February 16, 2009, KuroiBara
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wrote:
Me and my ex's story...Beautifully told by you. Thank you for writing this.
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On Tuesday, January 25, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
i love the 4th stanza,although the poem in its entirety is wonderful. your useage of words to etch out a scene,a feeling,a time, is amazing.i feel as if i am there,feeling the same. *excellent*
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On Thursday, January 20, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
"tears gone stale for a love gone cold" -- wonderful line, I get a sense of a peaceful feeling while reading this, well written and well said. Lovely write.
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