with weak eyes

By dropsofhate

eyes so wide,
cry themselves bruised
as the sky and all life,
fades so far away.
reach those weak arms out
find nothing,
to hold yourself together with.
feel your, brittle, heart split into three
hopelessly wish upon shadows of your imagination.
helplessly wish.
your body;
so broken,
so shattered.
it shivers like the old mans' bones
OH, how they rattle under the moist of the soil!
without a casket
without a slither of hope.
cry so shy,
weak little eyes.
cry 'till bruised.
everything fades,
so far away

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Copyright 2005 dropsofhate
Published on Monday, January 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: all I can say is, amazing write my friend

  • purr_verse On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    a deeply poignant and elegant write; lovely work...saddening but very stylishly so.

  • dropsofhate On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    thank you very much. ♥

  • sIo On Monday, January 10, 2005, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    so sad yet so delicate.

  • dropsofhate On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    ♥ ♥ ♥

  • A former member wrote: :(

  • Deadly Embrace On Monday, January 10, 2005, Deadly Embrace (41)By person wrote:

    well done. -de

  • dropsofhate On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    thank you very much ♥

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