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The Taste of Salt
By Syn
Breathing in...
salty air
to touch me
burns within
forsaken sin
forbidden
calm me
refree me
caught
trapped inside your glory
trying
lying
all a moment of pleading
call me
calm me
claim me
but will you ever?
im nothing to treasure
nothing to hold
but behold...
in the depths you find life
in me you lose yourself
merry daydream breaking
forsaking me
incessant gluttony
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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Thursday, December 30, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, February 15, 2005, purr_verse
(1052)
wrote:
excellent write that i'm sorry to have missed! Until now, anyway. The concluding stanza is fantastic; I could reread this several times...and sort of already have... Love it. Wonderful work!
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On Thursday, January 6, 2005, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
This is very cool, I liked it. "Call me. Calm me. Claim me." nicely done there. -Michael
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A former member wrote:
love the word flow great write
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A former member wrote:
i like the rhythm of this poem. it really sets a clear mood. great job.
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