skyline drive & skyline drive*

By theBAC



she asked: yeah... why do you like me?
he said: you make me feel warm
she said: i can be pretty cold
he said: that’s when i warm you

and then she cried a good cry

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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Sunday, December 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Loneal On Saturday, March 5, 2005, Loneal (86)By person wrote:

    Quiet, simple, nice. :) ~L (Synthetic Darkness)

  • purr_verse On Sunday, December 26, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    genuinely emotive and gentle, insightfully honest piece. lovely.

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