Liquid Impressions
By call to arms
Her eyes don't tell a story
They're unlively...
Almost dead.
No longer vivid, No beauty.
Just sorrow.
She tried to bury it deep
But her hands wouldn't let her.
Shallow indentations, but it was enough.
She tried to place them strategically.
Set the trap, to kill the beast.
Paid close attention
To intricate detail.
Her placement could not have been
Anymore incorrect.
The sky never opened,
And drained it's eyes.
Those mocking clouds,
Took deep breaths
and held back their tears.
Nothing left to quench her thirst.
Dust and bones.
Bury it deeper this time.
Her shaky hands will try.
Searching for an underground spring
Bringing all that she needs to stop hurting.
She needs overflowing rivers
And devastating floods
Thousands injured, hundreds dead
Just to be satisfied.
Comments on "Liquid Impressions"
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A former member wrote:
And yet, you can't kill the beast
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A former member wrote:
ok, freaky, do you know me? why are you writing about me? just kidding. i relate. i love your writing.
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A former member wrote:
I enjoyed this write. keep up the good work.
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A former member wrote:
Wow, amazing write. I salute your skill, your poem had me captivated, awesome stuff.
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A former member wrote:
very painful write created beautifully.
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx
(36) wrote:
Wow. I love this and the way you wrote it. Great write.