This Is Not Your War

By Soulfire

Jaysi, I love you please come back
This is not your war, send Bush to Iraq

You and I were once two peas in a pod
Now we are different, and Bush is your God
I want peace, legal weed, and love
You pretty much despise all of the above


What do you think will happen to you over seas?
Will you kill Bin Laden and set our fears free?
No.

Reality has it that you may never come back
Jaysi, this is not your war, send Bush to Iraq

I don't want to lose my sister or my friend
Tell me, dear leader, when will this end?




*Tears* This is dedicated to my best friend and sister: Jaysi Bennetto. She is to be deployed in January...God save her.

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Copyright 2004 Soulfire
Published on Monday, December 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • xserratedsoulx On Sunday, February 5, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    AMEN!!! ~lauren~ ps--i love your pic. you look so happy.

  • ONEANDLONELY On Thursday, June 2, 2005, ONEANDLONELY (114)By person wrote:

    Something that has been going on since the beginning of man...Loved-ones going off to war (their choice?) I love your compassion. Pot...Now I just get paranoid.

  • Mr King On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    thank you for this one... i agree completely... PEACE, LOVE, & LEGALIZE IT... 21 and over... 1, Seth

  • Mr King On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    My prayers are with your sister. If she does go, may she return home in newfound wisdom, peace, and health...

  • A former member wrote: exactly; send Bush and his greedy, minds-bent-on-world-domintaion henchmen to Iraq. Our brothers and sisters, mothers and fathers, line up for the recruiter, believing they're doing their fellow Americans and the rest of the world a favor....

  • A former member wrote: and those who do realize that they're being used as pawns to push Pax Americana, enlist to prove to themselves they can kill more than rabbits, to mutate their fear into hatred. All the wrong reasons, none of the right answers..

  • AniDayz On Monday, December 6, 2004, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    this is sweet and very touching. i hope things turn out okay.

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