Lost Without You

By Kali Ma

The imprint of your body lies still in our bed,
though your smell only lingers faintly,
teasingly playing with my hungry senses.
The ruffled black sheets are undying testament
to the fact that you were truly once here beside me -
not a figment of an over-actice imagination,
bringing sweet fantasys to haunting reality.
The empty silk scarfs tied so delicately to the bedposts
bring back blissful memories of tempstous play
and cause a fleeting smile to stain my lips
before the emptiness strikes a lonely chord in my heart
and leaves jewels of tears glimmering in my broken eyes.

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Copyright 2004 Kali Ma
Published on Saturday, November 27, 2004.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Silent Assassin On Thursday, December 23, 2004, Silent Assassin (108)By person wrote:

    Wow, I know exactly how you feel. You painted the picture in my mind and brought back some bad memories of my own. I didn't like the bad memories, but your poem was that good that it did. Very nice.

  • Rone4611 On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Rone4611 (121)By person wrote:

    thats it! I give up! your going in my favorites! =) Excellent, and somehow.. suductive maybe?

  • A former member wrote: great job....beautiful

  • A former member wrote: very beautiful write

  • ShadowFlight On Saturday, November 27, 2004, ShadowFlight (105)By person wrote:

    this soft sensual image doesn't seem at all lost... superb write

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