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DONE!!!
By Bleeding Tree
Everythings cold and hard and wet
You've taught me a lesson I'll never forget
Buckets of tears and cups of blood
All with my face down in the mud
Sputtering suffering trying to breathe
You literaly brought me down on my knees
How you ask, I never touched you
Don't you see, you didn't have to.
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Copyright 2004 Bleeding Tree
Published on Friday, November 26, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
holy s***.....wow. breathtaking. -zay
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On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, blue
(1454)
wrote:
"Buckets of tears and cups of blood"...that's great! let ME know when it's finished! ;) ~B
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, Rone4611
(123) wrote:
waiting for the end... so much suspence in these half written ones =)
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, darkleprechaun
(56) wrote:
berry nice... me likes ... should finish soon i hope so i can read it... the sooner the better hehehe YEAH!
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A former member wrote:
i also look forward to the rest good start
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A former member wrote:
This was a good start but it would be better if it went even further! Your writing is assume and I hope to read more latter! Welcome to DP!
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
look forward to seeing the rest of this, good write so far though, lemme know when its finished ;)
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