Look Deeper

By Soulfire

A whirl of emotions, she is lost in confusion
Settling down is but a sick illusion
Thrown into reality, a girl growing up too fast
An adult among children, the outcast

Knowing pain all too well
She cries at night, but you could never tell
Always a smile to hide the pain
Working so hard to hide the shame

I am in your class, on the bus, and at the store
But you have never noticed me before
I hide behind my smile
Dying inside all the while

Reach out to me and be my friend
Because tonight just might bring my life's end

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Copyright 2004 Soulfire
Published on Wednesday, November 24, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Reminds me of a girl i went to school with, awesome write, thank you

  • BeautifulCalamity On Sunday, December 19, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    "I am in your class, on the bus, and at the store But you have never noticed me before". .one of the simplest pains of all, loneliness. . expressed in an awesome way though.. which makes this a great piece. .and one I can relate to completely

  • Soulfire On Monday, November 29, 2004, Soulfire (96)By person wrote:

    Reaching out to someone can be as simple as saying "Hey, I know things have been hard for you lately. I am here if you need me." Thanks for all the comments!! Love it!

  • whisperer On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    mmmm...nice work...-]darkness[-

  • urbanhumility On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    understood..........well done........urban

  • A former member wrote: very good write.

  • stormtalk On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    How would you want someone to reach out to you?

  • Butterfly On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Butterfly (99)By person wrote:

    Damn it. You made me sign in again. Love this. I know exactly haw all of this feels. Loved every word. Excellant write.

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