Look Deeper
By Soulfire
A whirl of emotions, she is lost in confusion
Settling down is but a sick illusion
Thrown into reality, a girl growing up too fast
An adult among children, the outcast
Knowing pain all too well
She cries at night, but you could never tell
Always a smile to hide the pain
Working so hard to hide the shame
I am in your class, on the bus, and at the store
But you have never noticed me before
I hide behind my smile
Dying inside all the while
Reach out to me and be my friend
Because tonight just might bring my life's end
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Copyright 2004 Soulfire
Published on Wednesday, November 24, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Look Deeper"
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A former member wrote:
Reminds me of a girl i went to school with, awesome write, thank you
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
"I am in your class, on the bus, and at the store But you have never noticed me before". .one of the simplest pains of all, loneliness. . expressed in an awesome way though.. which makes this a great piece. .and one I can relate to completely
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On Monday, November 29, 2004, Soulfire
(96) wrote:
Reaching out to someone can be as simple as saying "Hey, I know things have been hard for you lately. I am here if you need me." Thanks for all the comments!! Love it!
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, whisperer
(166) wrote:
mmmm...nice work...-]darkness[-
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
understood..........well done........urban
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A former member wrote:
very good write.
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
How would you want someone to reach out to you?
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Butterfly
(99) wrote:
Damn it. You made me sign in again. Love this. I know exactly haw all of this feels. Loved every word. Excellant write.