Take your pain away

By dark faery

I hate this feeling that I have. I love someone so much but they dont love me in return. I guess things are just realy fucked up that way. You left and came bake my feelings have never changed. i wana hold you and take all the pain you ever felt away. Remember all the fun we had?
I feel as If your running from something you know is true.
If I had a dick Id be you. I feel we were ment to be together. I dont understand why I cant just be with you....
I LOVE YOU. Ill give you every thing you need. That comferting grip you need. Ill be here forever to take your pain away

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Copyright 2004 blbhd
Published on Monday, November 15, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • JiNx On Monday, November 15, 2004, JiNx (98)By person wrote:

    *Agrees with Nes* Awesome write.. You can feel the plea in your words like your right here yelling it out looking me straight in the eyes... -JiNx(ie)

  • Nesfurata On Monday, November 15, 2004, Nesfurata (58)By person wrote:

    This is a wonderfully written plea for love. I know all to well the pain you express. You did a great job with this! -Elizabeth

  • mysticventures On Monday, November 15, 2004, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    love is never wasted - even if only for friendship!

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