~Scratched Memories On Faceless Walls...~

By Daegonna

You Walked To Her
A Smile On You Evil Lips,
Fully Knowing Of The DESTRUCTION You'd Cause
With Those
Few...
Simple...
Words.
You Said Them And
Smiled That Smile You Always Had Then
You Left Her Sitting There
Dazed And
Confused
Like Always
Then You Could See Her Cracked Smile Slowly
Oh, Ever So Slowly
Breaking Away From Her
Frozen Lips...
Then A Wail Went Up,
Like A Banshee Killing The Man That Scorned Her
And Was The Cause Of Her Pain...

Written For Sarah... He's A Dick Trust Me We All Know...

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Copyright 2004 Daegonna
Published on Wednesday, November 10, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • BeautifulCalamity On Friday, November 12, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    aww, i'm flattered that you chose my title. as i said before,liked this write... :)

  • BeautifulCalamity On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    ..hmm.. i dunno, if i wrote this i'd probably call it something like "scratched memories on faceless walls".. i dunno.. liked it thought, towards the end

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    when I read it I thought "Few Simple Words" till I saw what a strong title Stormcomin had picked out ^_^

  • Stormcomin On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Stormcomin (32)By person wrote:

    Very nice. I am unfamiliar with Sarah or the events prompting this work but, how about..."When Evil Speaks, Angels Reply", or something like that.

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