Under the raven wings

By StAinedNblood

My nightmares are incomplete
Falling behind the line
Wondering in circles filled with shame
Watch me drift away with time
Alone and withered in a lie

Help what can't be fixed
It's broken and shattered
Under theses raven wings
I hide wanting to become something I despise
How long did you watch?
How long did I cry?
I can’t remember anymore

Change the pace of my beating heart
It’s not right, and it’s falling apart
My eyes are closed, and my mind is shot
I can’t think, can’t move
I won’t breathe

Under the raven’s wings
See me as I really am
Not real you see
But alone and lost
I don’t remember who I am
Can you tell?
Who am I?
Tell me why you’re here

Attacking my soul
The remains are falling
Time is running
But I stop moving
Under theses raven wings
I want to see your soul cry
Let it die, along with mine

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Copyright 2004 StAinedNblood
Published on Wednesday, November 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • Zhee On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this was really a great write...good job!

  • xSightxSetxHighx On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, xSightxSetxHighx (11)By person wrote:

    i read this earlier today..hehe..when you wrote it. Very good writing stefani, but you know i love it all.

  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    awesome. A_C

  • mysticventures On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    very well written !!

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