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armour & avondale
By theBAC
the tear he cried fell into a puddle
as he saw his face reflected
the sun & atmosphere
sucked up that tear
& formed a cloud
and that cloud carried the tear 15 miles
to also cry
& to drop that tear
on the head of the girl it was meant for
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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Friday, October 8, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, November 26, 2006, Mari
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wrote:
holy shit, just the idea of that. is so...so... i dont know the word for it, but it's beauttiful.
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On Sunday, October 22, 2006, Brimstone
(12) wrote:
In all the desperation of superstition this is a skeptical, plausible twist - well thought and composed.
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On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, Thorn
(283) wrote:
Oh, wow. This is beautiful...
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A former member wrote:
*warm* This philosophy is lovely, just what I want to read. It's been a while since I came back to your works.. It continues to amaze me. ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Saturday, October 9, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
great idea and superbly written
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On Saturday, October 9, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
sad and sweet, sweet and sad nice write
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
thats sweet!
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