armour & avondale

By theBAC

the tear he cried fell into a puddle
as he saw his face reflected
the sun & atmosphere
sucked up that tear
& formed a cloud
and that cloud carried the tear 15 miles
to also cry
& to drop that tear
on the head of the girl it was meant for

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Published on Friday, October 8, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "armour & avondale"

On Sunday, November 26, 2006, Mari (419) wrote:

holy shit, just the idea of that. is so...so... i dont know the word for it, but it's beauttiful.
On Sunday, October 22, 2006, Brimstone (12) wrote:

In all the desperation of superstition this is a skeptical, plausible twist - well thought and composed.
On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, Thorn (282) wrote:

Oh, wow. This is beautiful...
A former member wrote: *warm* This philosophy is lovely, just what I want to read. It's been a while since I came back to your works.. It continues to amaze me. ~Wish Upon A Star
On Saturday, October 9, 2004, Anth (1126) wrote:

great idea and superbly written
On Saturday, October 9, 2004, Angst Queen (370) wrote:

sad and sweet, sweet and sad nice write
On Friday, October 8, 2004, Zhee (529) wrote:

thats sweet!