Make It Be Known.
By Amanda Parnell
caresse her skin,
every touch is almost
as stimulating as the next.
you can see it in her eyes.
but hear it mostly in the soft moans
she lets out.
every single movement made is
better than the last.
as the music beat changes,
so does the rhythm.
and so do you.
she loves to put on pretty
clothes,
because she knows how you
enjoy taking them back off.
and when lay her down gently on the floor
hush her lips before they part.
this is time for you to prove yourself to her,
this is your time...
this is your time to tell..
this is your time to tell her what
you are really wanting to do to her.
let it be known.
Don't be afraid,
so does not bite.
[.hard.]
anything you dream about doing,
she will make sure it is ten times more
as exciting than you dreamed.
and when this is just a memory,
she will crave your touch again.
Comments on "Make It Be Known."
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A former member wrote:
Nice, but I have to say, if a woman allows you to do what you have written above, then she truly is yours and yours alone.... lost in exstacy, she is with you even when she is not physically there with you. If this be done, the woman will not be able stop thinking of you. Nice job.
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A former member wrote:
so passionate. hot air! took my breath away..great job
~manda~
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
this is a wonderful poem. I agree with Zhee...you have a great way with words. ~Unlucky
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On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
you really know how to put passion into words.. amazing work.
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A former member wrote:
So pretty and stilled.