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~INDENTURED~
By Zhee
(this is another oldie...)
Can you see the truth
With your blinded eyes?
Can you still feel -
Numb with all these lies?
Does this wretched machine
Bring you any relief?
Or do you still hold on to -
All your shattered belief?
Do the tears move you
Of all those you deprive?
Running with all the dead -
Are you still alive?
Has your beast corroded
Your empty shell?
Are your angels burning
In this blazing hell?
Till your body dies,
Till your flesh rots,
Your are but a slave -
Chained to their thoughts. . .
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Thursday, September 23, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen
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wrote:
...i really don't know what to say on this one...i like it...it has me thinking a bit
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On Saturday, September 25, 2004, stuart_pid
(135) wrote:
i like this, glad i got to read the whole version. the last line especially rings true to me. you are so insightful, no wonder you became a psychiatrist. good write.
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On Thursday, September 23, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
who is the who in me...if could figure that out.. i wouldnt need to write!!!
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On Thursday, September 23, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
whose thoughts??i think at at the time i wrote this everyone wanted me to conform...to what is expected of you and the thought process "those who are older and wiser" have enslaved themselves to..
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A former member wrote:
Another fave. :) I'm crazy that way. :) ~Shane~
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A former member wrote:
One question: Who's thoughts?
Another: Who is the WHO in you?
~Shane~
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