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More Dead Then Alive
By thinevoicetragic
Buoyant lies, Heart filled with spite.
Your words Poisoned my mind.
Creeping threw this world one step at a time.
seems i'm more dead then allive.
I'll Always live in the darkness.
I'll never find the light.
Wallowing in Pain.
Stumbleing to find my way.
Stuck in this never ending day.
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Copyright 2004 thinevoicetragic
Published on Wednesday, September 22, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, DarkWolf
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wrote:
This seems like it should be set to music. Well done, good rhythm. I can relate to the sentiment quite well. -Michael
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A former member wrote:
I think someone needs a nice loving hug.. Cheer up dear. Pretty write though, and I like the colour RED. ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
This would make for some good lyrics -Good Job shibby barn-tackular.
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, stuart_pid
(135) wrote:
i know the feeling.
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