More Dead Then Alive

By thinevoicetragic

Buoyant lies, Heart filled with spite.

Your words Poisoned my mind.

Creeping threw this world one step at a time.

seems i'm more dead then allive.

I'll Always live in the darkness.

I'll never find the light.

Wallowing in Pain.

Stumbleing to find my way.

Stuck in this never ending day.

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Copyright 2004 thinevoicetragic
Published on Wednesday, September 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • DarkWolf On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    This seems like it should be set to music. Well done, good rhythm. I can relate to the sentiment quite well. -Michael

  • A former member wrote: I think someone needs a nice loving hug.. Cheer up dear. Pretty write though, and I like the colour RED. ~Wish Upon A Star

  • DoctorAsh On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    This would make for some good lyrics -Good Job shibby barn-tackular.

  • stuart_pid On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, stuart_pid (135)By person wrote:

    i know the feeling.

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