No Sound

By SilverPagan

Tears falling
Siently calling
Out loudly
Without a sound
Skin opening
Tearing, Ripping
Blood dripping
Silent screams
No one hears
As these tears
Mingle
Saline mixes
With the
Blood as
It pools
Cools
As life
Passes
Flashes
Gone.

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Copyright 2004 'SilverPagan' - Jessica Poole
Published on Tuesday, September 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • purr_verse On Thursday, September 16, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    effective formatting here; nice rhythm shifts bring a rapid desparation to this piece. fine write! welcome to dp. :)

  • A former member wrote: wow, awesome write, captivating...took me in.

  • Northstar On Tuesday, September 14, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    captivating flow and imagery--minimalist wording with powerful expression--great! welcome to DP ;)

  • SilverPagan On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, SilverPagan (24)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

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