I Need an Ending.

By Syn

Its just another day
in this life
And nothings changed
but the tears I cry

Im numb and disposed
regressed and transposed
dead and dying young

The rhythm has left
the scheme is lacking
But mirrors my only thoughts

Where does emptiness lead
when youve reached zero?
Where does despair draw
the line of desperacy?

I smoke myself to sleep
and drink the day away
In false hopes to keep
would only be a lie
So I tred the water beneath my chest
until it slowly creeps to my nares

The ending is up to you
Where will you lead me tonight?
Will you hold me under
or try to save this life?

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Wednesday, September 8, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • MESUN On Sunday, September 2, 2007, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    i wonder if this is the way i've been feeling for so long. but i'm so disoriented i can't tell. quite a disturbing yet fitting piece.

  • DarkWolf On Thursday, September 9, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    This was great. The last stanza.. wow.. dark and so haunting.. you are so good with words and emotions. -michael

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