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A Flash Of Light
By thinevoicetragic
The stars Begin to fall to the ground.
The Sky is cold and grey.
I look up at the moon and begin to pray.
Save me from this day.
A flash of Light.
A Voice in the back of my mind.
Fear not I wont let you down.
When you feel as if your going to fall.
I'll pick you up from the ground.
I will save you from the evil that comes your way.
Walking in the graveyard at night.
free's me from the chaos outside that haunts my mind.
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Copyright 2004 thinevoicetragic
Published on Monday, September 6, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A Flash Of Light"
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A former member wrote:
i like it, its got kind of a tragic hero feel to it. its got a romantic feel to it which i like, kind of like somethings happening which you'd love to stop but the world seems to want to happen. nicely possitive in the face of adversity.
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, mysticventures
(527)
wrote:
cool stuff - great feel to this!
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
i love the end... you saved the best for last!
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
This one is very cool.. I love the last two lines.. awesome. -Michael
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On Monday, September 6, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
I am really surprised by this one--I like the way you go from day to night and from trying to make it through and then finding comfort in the graveyard at night--nicely done
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